Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Eternity: A Horrid Dream Comments

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The lovely woman is just the fish, going downstream.
When she looks, water is all that she sees.
And the hungry man is only the bear, searching for food.
While he lives, a meal is all that he needs.
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Dave Walker 22 September 2011

I like this. The wording brings everything To life. Good write. Thankyou very much for your kind words About my poem.

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Stefanie Fontker 20 September 2011

Vivid writing, this is incredibly detailed. You've really spun a tale with this poem, lovely writing.

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