Saturday, March 29, 2008

Eternity Comments

Rating: 2.7

I think of you
And I want to liken your memory
To something beautiful.
It seems your almost ethereal beauty,
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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2008

a fine expression indeed........thanks

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Ivor Hogg 22 July 2008

Although I am an old fashined rhyme and meter poet I can appreciate well written works in any form.Your word usage and imagery are excellent ivor

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teray bin hor na kisay mangni merian blaa teray bin hor na kisay karni dhop wich chhaan 'I shall let my senses forever seek Your imagery in heavens Skies, forests..the seas' They withdraw when they want to people we want the most best, rehan

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