Thursday, January 26, 2017

Eternity Comments

Rating: 5.0

To feel your mouth
on top of my mouth
your succulent lips
pressed into my lips
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Shakira Nandini
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Binayakumar Mohanty 09 November 2017

Souls mating forever Hope the feelings end never. Summing up sensuality to spirituality.Superb.Thanks for sharing.

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Sochukwu Ivye 29 October 2017

The latter lines are most moving of all. A well penned erotica, dear poet.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 20 October 2017

Frankness of eternity deserves 10+++I loved the poem. Thanks. Binaya

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