Eternity Comments

A fine and lofty verse nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm.

Awesome view of the after life in fellowship with the One Reason for our being - God. You captured it in a very personal way, declaring with confidence His promise fro all who put their trust in Him.

Oh how I love this one. I love the imagry. It made me feel as if I were there. Especially in the 'Throne room' around the alter giving God all the heartfelt praise' forever and ever. That's what I'm living for. Thanks for putting me right there.

Joe...Stellar use of Imagery here...Rhythn in sync & Fluxion lika a Dove's tail, smooth in evenflow...Very nice penning indeed.'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

james, i love your poetry i must say on first read. keep up good work and thanks a lot for visiting my side of the world.

This is such a beautiful write. A portrait of heaven. God Bless! Kingskid