Eternity Comments

Sober thoughts brilliantly woven in a poignant poem. Thanks for sharing Galina.

Finally got it at the tenth reading, the writer despite the breakup, is still in love till the end, till eternity. Very well written verse, outstanding!

The person who buried you alive should have been able to overlook whatever shortcomings you may have had if only for the sake of keeping the gem that you posses, the gem of your poetry.

Amazing poem, can't stop reading and re-reading, trying hard to understand the meaning behind each word, behind each stanza. The clearest that I came up with is a lover's breakup, I hope I'm not wrong. The passion and emotion expressed is simply beyond words.

My prayers fade away unheard The sky is far I wake in dread Eternity awaits ahead Impossible to bear, , , well writteb, fine poem. thank u very much. tony

Ow. This just ended like I had read nothing already, to show how I was pleasurably engaged. Powerful lines metaphysically charged. The poetess outdid herself here, going out of the body and fetching us those untold mystical imageries. So down-to-earth and persuading. This will be added to the list of my favourites. A deserving '10' for this piece of a master. Thanks for publishing for us.

Life and death! With the problems around us. Nice work.

Verily, a poem that gives a new dimension to hope

amazing, so well written and evocative.

This is a remarkable poem. It relates being buried alive but not in a literal sense I'm sure. This isn't Edgar Allan Poe! It's a psychological rejection, so that the speaker must look at her life and his life as if through a fog or curtain. This is addressed to your best friend but I find it scarey. There are so many things that restore us potentially - freedom, time/space, , blue skies, et alia. But isn't the speaker already experiencing a life apart time/space. blue skies and light. But the redemptive factor is not really present in this suffering. When the speaker is release she feels no joy. She feels fear. I cannot wrap my mind completely around this poem. I'm missing something....

You buried me a year ago Before my time Before my death A beautiful poem on dejection and disappointment with a little ray of hope of survival.Well written well done Col Muhammad Khalid khan