Saturday, May 16, 2009

Eternally Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

As flowers bloom in springtime
To garland nature's glow,
I know you now remember
Such beauty long ago.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

A brilliance seen that springtime That time just can't erase. Rachel Ann Butler

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Muhammad Ali 28 May 2009

beautiful love poem!

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Catrina Heart 27 May 2009

You have another marvelous sweet and romantic love poem written Wolfy....great alliteration and assonance of words...well framed and structured...10++++++++

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Cristy Upshaw 26 May 2009

words worthy of such beautiful and delicate love. how stunning your words and flow that grace these pages. this touched me deeply and lifts one spirit in believing there is such true love out there waiting.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 25 May 2009

enjoyed this.Thanks very much.

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Surayya Abbas 24 May 2009

Lovely poem with loving style.

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Ency Bearis 24 May 2009

beautiful love song.......10

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Eyan Desir 23 May 2009

Deep thinking went into this good work

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lovely piece..taking the season, nature along with a relationship and also a song along'' apoem with a soul'

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premji premji 23 May 2009

enwordment of love.............love remains green..........

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Jaci Burns 22 May 2009

sweet, beutifull, wonderous, amazing. you wright the best things. its full of heart. i love it! ! ! !

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Naidz Ladia 21 May 2009

a very nice piece with presentation of humble and sweet words..greeney dear...wish you goodluck..naizz

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fantastic poetry beautiful love tale

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 May 2009

Very free flowing and loving poem indeed..very beautiful...I was moved...thanks..10++

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Same time next year? Very nice flow and rhyme.always missing always remembering....

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David Taylor 16 May 2009

And now you've penned the poem, when death descends upon, those two that are here loving, their song will continue on.

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I love this. Such a rythmical flow of words. It makes me taste poetry. Thanks.

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