Sunday, October 2, 2005

Eternally Beautiful Comments

Rating: 4.8

as we grow up,
our sense of wonder fades:
nothing is more tragic than this.
when i feel the child within me dying,
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Dylan Summers
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Peter A. Crowther 03 October 2005

Good poem. It gets across the sense of reverence and wonderment that we can feel in looking at the night sky.

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Bill Smith 02 October 2005

enjoyed your poem, there really is something wonderful about looking up at a star filled sky

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Dylan Summers

Dylan Summers

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