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Wonderful love words melting into a beautiful poem luvli to read with the flying horse-Pegasus and ending eternally -your feelings I live +++++10+ regards

eternally yours (sign) poetry...........

Celebrate the miracle Of all that makes you YOU. Count a blessing for each candle-lit nite of love Have your cake and eat it too! With the red passion of the royal rays The Rays of the Sun Waiting for its dazzling day Unwrap this day and savor it And all the love that's there Send a dream-wish straight to Heaven on the wings of prayer Remember what a blessing you are Even after this day is gone. Mon ray shines in thou troubles at bay A scimitar more coruscating to conquer Peshawar You're a ray's gem, a priceless ray's treasure Let yourself shine on and on In each ray of love In each ray of hope flying high as the dove. Tactfully chosen medieval english and very classical way of representing thoughts.Ten fingers for a cheers.

another lovely write..wow, this is a pleasure to read..Like it

Hmm, dramatic and indulgent romantic themes are the first thoughts that come to mind here. There's an ordered effect to it with special effects of especially vivid, elusive, and appealing sentimental emphasis. In any case, heartfelt poetry like this always seems to give off a theatrical idenity to it that stirs a mélange of emotions.

Down below is an extract from Kamel, From: Kamel Mnhhjklmdtr (hellcity Algeria; Male; 28) To: Anjali Sinha Date Time: 2/24/2009 12: 14: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: hey Kamel (Nice name) hey dear, you write wonderful poems you may add this in 'ETERNALLY poem': ... my tears fell with the dews of morn and crystallized as diamonds upon earth's green hands Till the cold winds took them away higher and higher they reach the crescent moon who shaped my crown and sent it to me with the carriage and gave to me ... your poems are wonderful affection and nature projection of feelings scenes perfectly performed much tendress with little taste of sorrow which appears clearly in 'UNTIL DEATH DO US PART' especially that poem full of love but in most of your poems it's almost visible no angry, no blame, no hate tendency to use nature, gold, light, objects so pure hard for fast readers (who use to read newspapers, magazines... who look for headlines) to understand the deep meaning to catch your feelings until they examine it with precision you're someone sensible I mean romantic everyone remark it I continue reading your poems and comment them by the way I invite you also to comment my nonsens poems ok kamel in arab language mean 'perfect' but none's perfect and nodyahead is will smith song - Men in black OST

well penned of eternally.. every thing comes from heart.

This piece is so full of wonderful imagery. A captivating read from beginning to end. Take Care, Stacey

What a wonderful poem Anjali, , , I like it so much, very lot of expession, and you can make it in to lot of meaning, a beautiful penned, , hope I can feel that love... (^_^) v Naru Kaede,

hi Anjali, what a lovely poem and expression. i hope your love sparkle like a star and fill this wortld with its light. and may it continues till eternity. good luck. please read my new poems of 2009, its on pg1 with * on them. thanks and take care seema

In verse and songs Sweep me in thy arms Sculpt me as thou will Colour me with thy brush Slow and slow Slow the love The love that shall remain Forever. My friend this did me in. lovely

so lovely...sweet words dancing in this piece.. superb choice of words...so poetic... amazing imagery...with a touch of sweet fantasy....... i will love this very expressive piece...***eternally*** 10+++++

A lovely write 10+ for this beuatifully penned compostion

Cut it short ' im eternally yours '. Sweet love poem.

ur poems pretty much give me an impression of sarojini naidu's poems. hats off to u sis

a knight battles for his last breathe. Bleeding heart flows undying warmth of his princess love. Staked by a spear of her beauty! very beatiful....once again....10ssssssssssssssssssssssss

an elagant painter you are...a lovely flow there makes me fly too

A poem bathed in awesome images from Nature with plaintive note pining for cup of love overflowing eternally. It has the touch of the poetry of Keats in Persian poetic style. CP

Very elegant poem with beautiful phrases to colour the portrait of spotless love. Brilliant work Anju. Well done.

The verse once started With colours From the rainbow I wrote on a sky of heart with a pen of palm tree and ink of blue sea Still I am uuable to tell how joy make my heart swell When I see you in nature And speaking through every living creature........ I would worship you eternally in a joy and in a difficulty................ Wonderful Write........