When thy flying horse swings
Towards the city,
The drummers many
And songs on lips of children and old
Fill the air.
O thank the stars
Their guiding light
The rays of the sun
Upon the bridge of gold
Thy royal hand
When thou seest dreams
Like flames upon the altar shine,
And hear the lullaby of nature
Then thy shield will be the
Suspended red harvest moon,
Under the canopy
Of open blue skies
I have found
the images of love,
my tears fell
with the dews of morn
and dried
when dark didst trance the sky
In sleep
I walked forlon
Till the cold winds ushered
The sun lit morn
The verse once started
With colours
From the rainbow
Swept my pages
Like dancing waves from the sea
What have I done?
My knightly prince
See,
My heart of gold
Burns in deserts and wild
Love was the sign I followed
To that tavern,
Where the cups filled with wine,
The tears of my nectar of love,
Fill up
Brim to brim
Nay, do not say,
Thy horse with wings
Will swing
There for the last time
Bless me
with arms outstretched
with banners in benediction
brighter than the
brightest silks of Peshawar.
In verse and songs
Sweep me in thy arms
Sculpt me as thou will
Colour me with thy brush
Slow and slow
Slow the love
The love that shall remain
Forever.
Yes ever
ETERNALLY
30-01-2009
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This piece is so full of wonderful imagery. A captivating read from beginning to end. Take Care, Stacey
What a wonderful poem Anjali, , , I like it so much, very lot of expession, and you can make it in to lot of meaning, a beautiful penned, , hope I can feel that love... (^_^) v Naru Kaede,
hi Anjali, what a lovely poem and expression. i hope your love sparkle like a star and fill this wortld with its light. and may it continues till eternity. good luck. please read my new poems of 2009, its on pg1 with * on them. thanks and take care seema
Wonderful love words melting into a beautiful poem luvli to read with the flying horse-Pegasus and ending eternally -your feelings I live +++++10+ regards
Celebrate the miracle Of all that makes you YOU. Count a blessing for each candle-lit nite of love Have your cake and eat it too! With the red passion of the royal rays The Rays of the Sun Waiting for its dazzling day Unwrap this day and savor it And all the love that's there Send a dream-wish straight to Heaven on the wings of prayer Remember what a blessing you are Even after this day is gone. Mon ray shines in thou troubles at bay A scimitar more coruscating to conquer Peshawar You're a ray's gem, a priceless ray's treasure Let yourself shine on and on In each ray of love In each ray of hope flying high as the dove. Tactfully chosen medieval english and very classical way of representing thoughts.Ten fingers for a cheers.
another lovely write..wow, this is a pleasure to read..Like it
Hmm, dramatic and indulgent romantic themes are the first thoughts that come to mind here. There's an ordered effect to it with special effects of especially vivid, elusive, and appealing sentimental emphasis. In any case, heartfelt poetry like this always seems to give off a theatrical idenity to it that stirs a mélange of emotions.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Down below is an extract from Kamel, From: Kamel Mnhhjklmdtr (hellcity Algeria; Male; 28) To: Anjali Sinha Date Time: 2/24/2009 12: 14: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: hey Kamel (Nice name) hey dear, you write wonderful poems you may add this in 'ETERNALLY poem': ... my tears fell with the dews of morn and crystallized as diamonds upon earth's green hands Till the cold winds took them away higher and higher they reach the crescent moon who shaped my crown and sent it to me with the carriage and gave to me ... your poems are wonderful affection and nature projection of feelings scenes perfectly performed much tendress with little taste of sorrow which appears clearly in 'UNTIL DEATH DO US PART' especially that poem full of love but in most of your poems it's almost visible no angry, no blame, no hate tendency to use nature, gold, light, objects so pure hard for fast readers (who use to read newspapers, magazines... who look for headlines) to understand the deep meaning to catch your feelings until they examine it with precision you're someone sensible I mean romantic everyone remark it I continue reading your poems and comment them by the way I invite you also to comment my nonsens poems ok kamel in arab language mean 'perfect' but none's perfect and nodyahead is will smith song - Men in black OST