Eternal Warmth Comments
I needn't a Sun at dawn,
To warm my passions.
Or Sunlit, I wished so!
May our love be warmed!
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beautiful....the picture gets crystal clear in the readers' minds....gud job....
Your choice of words puts the reader in a position where they feel themselves candlin on the beach under the sky. U portray it perfectly...congrats.
I really like the message of your poem. Everyone wants to be loved and this poem exceptionally describes those feelings. Thanks for posting!
eloquent and melifluous, the words flow naturally and beautifully. exceptional 10+
The warmth of this poem just melt me away as I feel your emotions, line by line.So profound. Beautiful.. Thank you for sharing.
You captured me; I couldn't even blink till I read through. This is a master piece.
your poem is fabulous and i liked all the lines. when i was reading your lines, i could able to view the scenes of your lines in my mind, the best quality of a poet. Especially the way you describe is simply awesome and that's the poetic touch by a master poet. Simply the best. Thanks for inviting me to read your piece.
superb use of words, so direct to the soul, heavenly touching. thanks for your comments.
Holy moly, Holy dooly! What pleasant poem it is! The pleasure is my to read such lines like these.............. 'I needn't a Sun at dawn, To warm my passions. Or Sunlit, I wished so! May our love be warmed! Like the scorching sun.' You can hit the bull's eye with poems like these. I appreciate your energy to write love poems. You have good hand in writing love poems my fellow poet, This poem is simply superb.........A pat and a hat to the poet. Click! Click! Ha! ha! Ha!
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7/26/2025 2:05:56 PM # 1.0.0
great piece. I like it!