Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Eternal Throne....One And Only Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mute and lone, Yon desert dune.
heavens apart old freckle face,
in silence stood my friend the moon.
I trudge along the shifting sand,
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saadat tahir
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Kanav Justa 25 May 2013

Guide me by take me home, where flowers bloom, no worries roam. tranquil peace that dreams had shone. shimmering glow of the Eternal Throne. beautiful lines and beautiful rhymes, , , , , , , loved it, , ,

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Yasmin Khan 23 May 2013

A tranquil scene is painted in pastels. A serene and somber picture of solitude in a moonlit night, it's nostalgic and gloomy but hope too shines like a morning star.

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Meena Mustafa 05 July 2012

A lovely poem...smooth flow :)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 June 2010

Guide me by take me home, /where flowers bloom, no worries roam./tranquil peace that dreams had shone./shimmering glow of the Eternal Throne. …after grueling journey in ‘life-desert’…it’s our ‘Divine Oasis’…excellently poemed 10//10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Shakir Gumnam 17 September 2009

A beautiful poem, worth more than ten....

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Yelena M. 17 April 2009

A beauty incarnated in this delicious poem.Thanks for sharing, Saadat. Best wishes. A.

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Ency Bearis 15 April 2009

great narrative poem..nice flow and read...10

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