Eternal Thirst Comments

what KIND of thrust are we talking about, madam? ? When will my thirst be satiated? I choke on the dust of despair, And a sigh of weariness leaves my lips As I fall to my knees in prayer...for a 'nonreligious' (i think) person, this is a cool stanza. my favorite so far. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - gee! despair twice! can i help? ? let's send this one to my Showcase. bri :) nice rhyming; as good as mine! ! !

a beautiful love poem so well written a song of poets a dreams of fools peace

Wonderful piece, a pleasure to read.

I love your love poems, ethereal and platonic.