Saturday, March 7, 2009

Eternal Surrender Comments

Rating: 4.5

The child
at the feet of mother
figures her toes
and licks her legs
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lalitha iyer
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Amrit Rathi 14 June 2010

Your poems are 'milk of heart'! Great Surrender! One who has give all love to her child, all emotions in surrender in young age, then why in old age she will not be blissful (here I differ!) for the life well-lived and pray The Almighty with a smile in the tears without bothering about the fading outside world? Your style, use of words is so appropriate and rich that one marvels what is going as the poem flows! Deserves 10+.

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