Through white curtains as I peep into your soul
In the crippling chill of this January winter night
The warmth of your words melts the frozen ice
The silken sound of sweet words behind them
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Great imagery in this peaceful soothing piece, thanks 10 Lynda xx
Nice piece, I especially like the begining. Very peaceful, musical and full of beauty and desire, one can trully lose oneself here in the fantasy this poem offers. Love it 10
Enjoyed this very much, and is filled with so much discriptive imagery. I like how you made the reading easy but filled with so much hope, I love the spring, so naturlly I was taken in by the title...... Bonnie
really nice thoughts...very divine and captivating... has a very different appeal...so calm soothing.... 10+++ Maia
A beautifully written piece Chandra timelessly classical But the Gods decreed seasons to teach us to endure the differences. Eternal spring might be beautiful but would produce no harvest
Beautiful imagery in this poem - there is a sense of calm and peace in your eternal spring...Lovely write CPS
the title and the beautiful poem, stunning images- very uplifting. written in a meditative state, where one experiences eternal spring and bliss. truly awesome Sir. thanks Mamta
Eloquence in any language or culture.Very beautiful and soul touching. There is indeed a place where the music never ends. Always your friend, Sandra
wonderful complex metaphor In the warmth of love the icy glaciers melt wonderful lyric poem, lovely to read.. 10/10