Thursday, November 17, 2005

Eternal Souls Comments

Rating: 4.8

And as she laid on the bed by the old dresser,
she slowly drifted into a sleepy state,
a calming feeling washed over her body,
like the waves of the mighty sea.
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Steve Armstrong
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Shiza Khan 24 December 2007

stephen it's soooooo beautiful....u wrote it soo well...luv it

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Ernestine Northover 21 November 2005

Wow, that's stunning. Made my eyes water. Love Ernestine

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Vanessa Brown 17 November 2005

aww what a beautiful poem! i love it! so sweet and so....i dno realy, i jus think its rly rly good :) well done!

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