Last night's dreams reflected
but hidden below heavy eye lids,
the smile is exposing
salient features of the sweet dreams,
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I am wordless! Such a magnificent piece………….! ! Just I love to quote some lines here, “Sweetheart! You may be taller than the tallest/In a second I shall fly thousands of miles/ to find your lips with eternal smiles. Amazing imagination, wonderful expression! Thanks a lot dear sir for sharing…10
Beautiful flow of words that smiles from miles apart. Loved reading it.
Superb Akhtar..your flow of thoughts and words inspire me a lot...thank you very much for this excellent poem
Dear Jawadji, your poem 'Eternal Smile' is an amusing one and it is laudable for its collocations and way of presentation. Enjoyed with beautiful photo provided. Thanks for sharing.10/10