Eternal Smile (Being Inspired By A Photo Of Poet Amitava Sur) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Eternal Smile (Being Inspired By A Photo Of Poet Amitava Sur)

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Last night's dreams reflected
but hidden below heavy eye lids,
the smile is exposing
salient features of the sweet dreams,
when I awake I found
I am the same helpless man!
But while sleeping
I did swim against the streams.
I know this life is too short,
and lovely dreams may not come true in it,
but believe and hope this life is a dream,
shall awake in a new world
where I'm not a misfit.
On that day
my eyes will not hide anything,
on that day
you will see my smiles,
I shall try to kiss someone on the Mount Everest,
I'll find only her soft and milky feet,
I shall kiss it but my ambitions are more and more,
Sweetheart! You may be taller than the tallest
In a second I shall fly thousands of miles,
to find your lips with eternal smiles.

Eternal Smile (Being Inspired By A Photo Of Poet Amitava Sur)
Wednesday, November 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: smile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 December 2017

Dear Jawadji, your poem 'Eternal Smile' is an amusing one and it is laudable for its collocations and way of presentation. Enjoyed with beautiful photo provided. Thanks for sharing.10/10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2017

I am wordless! Such a magnificent piece………….! ! Just I love to quote some lines here, “Sweetheart! You may be taller than the tallest/In a second I shall fly thousands of miles/ to find your lips with eternal smiles. Amazing imagination, wonderful expression! Thanks a lot dear sir for sharing…10

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 November 2017

Beautiful flow of words that smiles from miles apart. Loved reading it.

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Indira Renganathan 29 November 2017

Superb Akhtar..your flow of thoughts and words inspire me a lot...thank you very much for this excellent poem

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