Wednesday, July 4, 2012

Eternal Romance… 0507-2k12 Comments

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A lover's delight and everyone's dream
That leaves in eyes a twinkling realm

My land is the land of melodic themes
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Yasmin Khan 27 April 2013

The land of love and beauty has been admired profusely. Each word and image is used beautifully like beads in a string...'leaves, trinkets, vireos, brooks, larks and so on...a lovely poem

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Joanna Pavlides 02 September 2012

beautiful warm poem, flows perfectly

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Gabrielle Marie 31 August 2012

A lovely poem with a romantic panoramic view

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Sandra Feldman 14 August 2012

Love this poem, eternal romance, that is what the world needs now and always.............

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Annie Ali 06 August 2012

very well written poem... Gives a sublime and beautifully romantic feeling of patriotism and self pride in a whole...

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Israh Sadan 02 August 2012

Wow, such pride in and love for your land. Poetic patriot. Its a very well written poem, giving me almost the same lyrical feeling or flow of Robert Frost's Stopping by woods.

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Rishit Desai 02 August 2012

Beautifully expressed and the beauty is only enhancd by the simplicity in the words and meaning.

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Meena Mustafa 27 July 2012

Home sweet home :)))))))))) It's a great pleasure to read your poems.

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Heather Wilson 27 July 2012

My home is a place for eternal romance.... a beautiful poem, home is where the heart is.

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Romeo Della Valle 22 July 2012

I fully agree with the other fellow poets: Beautiful! A reservoir of touching words and rich imagery! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

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Dave Walker 14 July 2012

A very beautiful poem, like it. A fantastic write.

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eloida Capuno 11 July 2012

love of country well expressed.

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Roong S 10 July 2012

I wish I could write Like you..truly beautiful!

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Jane Quijano 10 July 2012

I could just imagine the beautiful place that inspired your lyrical poem! And how you love it!

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Indira Babbellapati 10 July 2012

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Valerie Dohren 09 July 2012

Beautifully descriptive write - enjoyed the read.

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Zaarah Jasmin 08 July 2012

well done! ! a 10 for ya.. love this! !

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Neela Nath Das 07 July 2012

Melodious and can be sung. The dancing of words, the rhyme scheme are adorable.Loved it.

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Unwritten Soul 06 July 2012

Harmonious melody, a complementary couplets...Green it will be green like a summer will never end, as you water your heart on your poem continuously with the love and patriotism inside it...absolutely a beautiful write couz, keep it up sat_Unwritten Soul

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The Reader 06 July 2012

A patriotic eternal romance! ! ! to think positive is a welcome shelter always from the fever & fret of here & now; but i'm a bit confused which genre of irony you have employed here: semantic, syntactic, verbal, situational, or socratic...

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