Sweet sound of sparrow
Awakened my mornings
Fragrance of fresh flowers
Mingles with your breath
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Nice flow of pictures e.g.'Thousands of stars, two bodies and one united soul'. But why 'Lost their identity' and not 'having same identity'? Take better care on wording I give it a 9+. Thanks for sharing. You have a talent.Go ahead, dear poet Aashish. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded
Wow. What a beautiful portrayal of emotion and affection. Ashish, I repeat what I said before. You are a natural poet.
Dear Aashish, I do not know if you are still active on poemhunter, however, I haven't been able to find your email address hence sending a message here. This particular poem has been plagiarized in a particular book that I came across. The person who claims to have authored these lines in that particular book has also plagiarized 12 of my poems. I am initiating legal action against this said person and would like to know your thoughts.