Eternal Plasma Poem by Tom Billsborough

Eternal Plasma



Oh sea,
Your eternal plasma whispers to me.
I am the real, you but a passing dream.
I am the nothingness
Which creates by being.
I am the unity
That you seek in song.
I the deep tarn, inscrutable as Tao.
I the cataract bathing in steam.
I am the Ganges and the Nile,
The yawning Pacific and the perpetual rain.
I am the heart but know no sorrow.
I shall not see you again tomorrow.
I have no desire to retain the fleeting,
Nor the unreality of seeing.

Wednesday, October 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jette Blackstone 17 October 2017

The unreality of seeing! I A conversation with the ocean. I have a strong affinity for the ocean. It is the place where I feel most connected to the world, to everything around me, less an I and more of a we, an us, or an everything. You words are really quite beautiful. I could delve in and break down line by line, but in this instance, what I like most about this poem, is how it makes me feel. Wonderful Tom.

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Tom Billsborough 17 October 2017

I share your affinity to the sea. We are only five miles away from the Irish Sea. It is a great heart pumping through the world, our bloodstream. One of my favourite Poets, St Jean Perse wrote a whole book of poems just about the Sea. A sort of Homage. It's called Amers which in French means sea parts. I read a bit of it most days.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2017

Eternal plasma whispers with passing dreams of perpetual rain. This is wonderful poem that is highlighted with beauty of philosophy. This is deep and excellent.10

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Denis Mair 09 October 2017

The dance of energy is alluring, but it ultimately portends the dissolution of inner experience as a source of meaning. You strike an insouciant note, for your your interiority offers something unique: it is a path to explore meaning, and meaning once established is not subject to dissolution. This is a humanistic affirmation. Interiority wrests meaning from the absolute ground of being, however one conceives it.

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Denis Mair 13 October 2017

I went down a wrong path of interpretation. Having read your reply, I realize that lines 3 through 15 are the message communicated in silence by the sea. Thanks for finding a shred of validity in my misreading.

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Tom Billsborough 11 October 2017

In a sense the sea is the mirror of my own interior dance of energy in my conscious self. I'm not sure it is insouciance. Rather a kind of modesty as my consciousness will not allow me credit for the creative act, insofar as I think I am but the vehicle of an inner self over which I have no control. But I agree that following the path to explore meaning provides us with the firm ground we need.

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