Thursday, August 15, 2013

Eternal Mirror Comments

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You have no time to write they say
For you can lay no claim to fame
What do I say to a busy world
Where fragments live in oblivion
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Abhay Vignesh Liginlal
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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 19 August 2013

A very fine argument. It would be more clear if mirror set against the mirrorNature one mirror; the poet another from which the reader grasps the recesses of society.

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Aswath Raman 16 August 2013

A fantastic poem my friend. Vaakkuakalkk nalla kanam und. THookki nokkiyal muthalum und. Oru yathartha vaayanakkaranu swantham manassu, parichu kodukkuka ennathanallo oru saahithyakaarante dharmam! Ethirpukalum illaymayum maathramulla ee lokathil alpamengilum nanmayude nanutha ormakal pakaraan thaangalkku kazhiyatte ennu njan aashamsikkunnu. Nanni

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 15 August 2013

great poem, i like the idea mirror can reflect anything, even if it just a mind really enjoy to read it i invite you to read my Btoken Mirror i feel it has same idea of this poem

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Great poem it reflects the thoughts that appear in the deepesdt part of ourselves and our spiritiuality

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Dave Walker 15 August 2013

A great poem with a great flow to it.

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