Monday, June 21, 2010

Eternal Lullaby Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet eternal lullaby
Lay me down gently
into the darkness that awaits.
Let your tempting kiss be not bitter
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Crystal Bradley
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Juan Olivarez 23 June 2010

Almost like a prayer, exquisitely penned.

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Eternal lullaby.. reminds me of an all encompassing divine protection. Under the shadow of the Almighty. beautifully penned! Loved the read, ; D

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Nerisha Kemraj 23 June 2010

A good poem :) feelings of warmth and gracefulness. good use of paradox: P

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