Eternal Love Comments

For you to pray! In the name of peace and love. Thanks for sharing.

Eternally once my love at 15 what seems eternal now in modern parlance love is only external what of eternal the world drifts at wind speed come and love me now pay no heed the worlds pacing fast can't you see twas eternal maybe let past e gone eternally today love is to be merry with someone who may remember thee eternally if you give in for free yes that's modernity none listen to me when gals have kids without the bounden laws of marriage singly they live eternally that's it so let it be your poetry was eternal now all can see read me

Your voice is leaping in the direction of Joyce, have you read him? Check out PORTRAIT, especially the chapter where the boy sees the girl in the water offshore. Incredible scene.

It's interesting how poetry written our teens are free from the distractions, disappointments or disillusionments that we somehow gather as we get older...it would be nice to feel that way often, thanks for reminding us it's possible...Great stuff, keep it up, and please check out my poems too, I'd appreciate it...