Saturday, May 10, 2014

Eternal..Love… Comments

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A golden sheaf that she knead
In silence talk to dreams
Solitude that lift her
The dreams that take to heights
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Lalitha iyer 14 May 2014

Well done........................

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Tajudeen Shah 11 May 2014

As ever, Love wins over the gusts and thunderous confusions of life, in legends and in real. Storms are meant to add strength to the ambiance of love. Obstacles often help to measure the worth and depth of every human passions. unbounded are hinderance and confusion sin real life these days, and in love it is noted much with more care as love itself reigns over all the passions of the mortals, whose absolute aim is to become immortal by means of the worth and devotion submitted to love. Your versification, purely in my opinion, would have been still better with the mechanics of compositions duly concerned. Sweetly penned and enjoyable read. God Bless.

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An iceberg that jealous on her love hit the side and sink in deep....The end of love is in sorrowness and poet beautifully carved a very nice poem of love in beautiful words which have the fragrance of feeling no doubt.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 10 May 2014

gem of a poem, love it.

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