Friday, March 28, 2014

Eternal Love Comments

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No love can last forever;
No love remains sublime.
But sometimes there's a moment
in the canopy of time.
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Thomas Vaughan Jones
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Patricia Grantham 07 April 2014

A beautifully and elegantly written poem. You can write from any arena Thomas. True love does really never dies. It only grows to eternity. Nice lilting verses.

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Ramesh Rai 06 April 2014

True love never dies. well said. Nicely penned from soft corner of your heart. Thanks for share

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Danny Draper 05 April 2014

A question for the ages and beautifully and deftly crafted. The discussion of love is perfect.

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Hazel Durham 30 March 2014

Stunning write, I believe in eternal love that knows no boundaries!

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Valerie Dohren 30 March 2014

Beautiful Thomas. Something upon which to ponder.

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Joseph Anderson 28 March 2014

True beauty in the thought. and perhaps it may be true.. A comforting and even joyous read. This is poetry with body and soul- very uplifting

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