Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Eternal Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometime far far away, a star glows and hides behind the moon.
Sometime far far away the moon smiles and hides behind the clouds.
Sometime far far away the sun shines and hides behind a mountain.
But sometime far far away.
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Shama Taimour Bukhari
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Eeshah Raaziah Naqavi 19 February 2014

Very beautiful! thumbs up Shama! may you always smile in colors of peace and pure love!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem '*A humble complaint*' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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