Tuesday, December 30, 2008

Eternal Love Comments

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The beauty of a rose
only lasts a while.
However beauty itself
lives on in remembrance
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Ruerd Visser
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Rachel Butler 20 July 2015

What the heart see's even when the the fresh bud becomes a rose and then the petal withers.

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Marieta Maglas 28 August 2009

wonderful complex (visual cognitive metaphor) : ''However beauty itself lives on in remembrance of the queen of flowers'' wonderful poem.......10

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Obinna Eruchie 15 August 2009

Beautifully written. Beauty may fade physically, but it lives on spiritually in the heart to last.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 22 January 2009

Simple and reflective! ! ! Love is living in our hearts, I believe in it, Sir. Keep writing! ! !

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Linda Moore 19 January 2009

Very Beautiful......10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 December 2008

Eternal love is when your partner dies, you die too.thats the purest eternal love.Nice writes as usual Ruerd.

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