Wednesday, February 13, 2008

Eternal Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

My heart burns with fire
as my eyes rain with desire
my mind dies in passion
as my body lives in satisfaction
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Eric Adams
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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

My heart burns with fire as my eyes rain with desire Rachel Ann Butler

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Greenwolfe 1962 05 February 2009

There is a kind of purity that comes from your prose that speaks of a special soul. A soul born in love, to love, for all eternity. This really comes through. GW62

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H H 30 March 2008

Desire, Being Fix the spelling but Never, Ever change the content. This is truly beautiful! H

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Aashish Ameya 13 February 2008

good one....simple and powerful...

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