Monday, July 3, 2017

Eternal Love Comments

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There was a longing inside her,
for a love that lasts forever.
Like the waves love the sand,
like the tides love the moon.
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Nidhi Agrawal
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 July 2017

for a love that lasts forever. nseparable and eternal. Indefinable without each other. a longing for an eternal love........... it is the desire of every one......... but is it possible with human beings. is not our human love sooooooo limited...... the only answer for this quest...... God alone can give you an eternal love. because God is eternal and never changing. human beings change........ thank you for this great idea that you present in your poem which made me think a lot........ thank you. God bless u dear poetess. tony

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Upendra Upm 03 July 2017

waves love sand, and tides love moon. love traversing all stars.Very good imagination. +++++10.

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