Friday, August 15, 2008

Eternal Homeland Comments

Rating: 5.0

To the city of the living Deity
Avoiding trace of impiety uglification
For reverence of liberally given benefits and edification
Guarding as a myrmidon the prize of salvation
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Dorothy Kardas, Psy.D. Th.D.
COMMENTS
Ahmad Shiddiqi 22 January 2009

wonderful! ! ! keep writing! ! ! could you read and comment on my poems too? Dear, friend. Please, answer honestly. Do you feel and think that my poems are worthy enough to be published into a book? Could you help me? Do you know the publishing company who can publish my poems? Please, inform me. Because I need to publish them. Thank you very much. Best regards, Ahmad Shiddiqi Kuta, Bali, Indonesia

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James B. Earley 11 January 2009

'To the Fatherland...the Ultimate City. This Motherland, my Lord... Never to feel that something is missing again...' Indeed.....a brilliant bit of creativity! Thanks.

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Charles Carole 06 October 2008

Yes indeed, 'Where the KING is, There all the wealth is...' This poem leaves us with a very deep longing for that Eternal Home...Motherland. But, you are so right...we have to continuously work much harder to get this final reward...'so much is missing'.. so much to do...so little time. Therefore, we must ONLY concentrate on what is of Eternal value...saving our soul, as well as the souls of our bretheren. Putting all your poems together Dr. Kardas, we see the great path that God has left us to follow. But do we? ...or...how well do we follow? Great wisdom in your words. Thanks again...CC

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Godspower Oshodin 08 September 2008

this is poetry at it zenith. i think we've start looking at things that relinquish our pains. thanks alot for this masterpiece............

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Manonton Dalan 07 September 2008

very political doc.. i can see barely a glimpse but i feel your frustration. from the heart. thank you very much.md

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Peter Laskin 31 August 2008

Dear Dr. Kardas, Again...awesome poem. It really makes one think deep and hard about truly what matters in life...getting to the 'Eternal Homeland'. Granted not easy for most of us...so much to do..so many failings...coming up short to what we really were meant to be...what a great thought to pray about tonight...Thanks is not enough... +Love in Christ+ Pete * Can't say for sure but this one may be top of my list favorites!

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Jenifer Loring 30 August 2008

Dear Dr. Kardas, this is truly a masterpiece! A piece of poetical literature at its best! Wonderfully expressed longing for real Homeland - 'God's country'. Poetry that is deep and full of wisdom. I'm sure I will re-read this poem many times and pass it on to others, especially my godchildren. I'm so very grateful that I found your work. God bless.

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