Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Eternal Embrace Comments

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Their fevered lips leaving thrilling trails of moist rippling quakes
In the most fulfilling embrace true love can find
With words endearing as heaven smiles on them
Depth of their love illuminating their souls
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Mohammad Muzzammil 05 June 2013

The poem has been written, seems, on the heat of emotion that you have poured down your heart in the state of rapture.

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Yasmin Khan 30 May 2013

Ecstasy of emotion and true love expressed with simplicity and grace and the shape and structure of the poem add to it's themes.

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