There was no earth
no moon, no sun, no star
the canvas was quite blank.
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Your hollowness created several stars and planets If hollowness can hide so many wonders what fullness will contain! Beautiful poem. Thank you.
Loved it. Written so beautifully you have given new voice to ancient thought. Thank you for sharing.
i know Ramesh Rai as a thinker poet like Dr.Iqbal, and this poem is another candle lit by him in the dark when we are unable to see anything. Great wrtie.
Poetry is the outcome of poet's condensed emotion..Loved reading.
This is beautiful! I feel my poem God's Kind of Poetry has close rescemblance to your poem! Enjoyed much!