Thursday, September 18, 2014

Eternal Creation Comments

Rating: 4.8

There was no earth
no moon, no sun, no star
the canvas was quite blank.
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ramesh rai
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Valsa George 30 September 2014

This is beautiful! I feel my poem God's Kind of Poetry has close rescemblance to your poem! Enjoyed much!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 September 2014

Your hollowness created several stars and planets If hollowness can hide so many wonders what fullness will contain! Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Savita Tyagi 20 September 2014

Loved it. Written so beautifully you have given new voice to ancient thought. Thank you for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 September 2014

i know Ramesh Rai as a thinker poet like Dr.Iqbal, and this poem is another candle lit by him in the dark when we are unable to see anything. Great wrtie.

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 September 2014

A great thoughtful poem, an universal message.

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Neela Nath Das 18 September 2014

Poetry is the outcome of poet's condensed emotion..Loved reading.

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