Friday, October 16, 2015

Eternal Bliss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time is fleeting
like a sand escaping from our fist,
We have no control over it
Enjoy every minute!
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Kavya .
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Valsa George 21 October 2015

You have made a very mature observation of life and laid down the golden rules to make it happy and enjoyable! Problems will come into life. What ever Fate decrees, we have to oblige and cannot change, but our attitude to life, we can change! With a positive attitude, we can surely reap bliss! The lines I love are; Friendship is a sweet responsibility, never an opportunity! ........................................Enjoyed the poem Kavya and thanks!

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Kavya . 23 October 2015

Thank you so much for your sweet comments Mam as always!

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