Eternal Bird Comments

We all look at things. A poet sees, observes, and assimilates. And then write a poem like this. Crows are very intelligent among birds. It comes out well in this poem. Lovely depiction.

Wonderful simplicity & lucidity found in your composition. Thanks a lot for sharing such a beautiful poem. Sudipta Bhattacharyya.

Keen observations. Love how you've held your train of thought, safely guiding the reader at every turn. Nicely done.

curious interpretation of some words, Interesting read, enjoyed.

you have touched my heart :) very beautiful poem

beautifully composed and flow of words

Though the 'eternal' thing a little bit mysterious it was a good read. Keep writing.. and thank you for the invitation.

You tell a tale so well, very original, great write!

nice flying bird who came from nowhere this poetry personal is quit unique and fine well done my friend god bless u

It very good I loved the imagery.

Interesting poem Vijay. I like the oxymoron 'shouting mildly'

Interesting and fantastic...I like this poem. Nilufer Dursun

A lovely picture in my mind, thank you Vijay

I was drawn to keep reading to find the missing clue in figuring out the meaning of this and I found it in the end. Good poem

Towards nowhere from here, from my home! Guess my pet? It’s none other than my eternal crow! what do u mean by eternal crow......... it is mysterious. You are trying to give expression to something in u or your desire or secret passion.. tell me wht is this eternal crow

It was well described

great poem i think it has a great poetic flow

i enjoy the energy in this poem, good use of strong meaningful words

Fantastic, beautifully written You poetry is so full of passion and strong wording wonderful thanks for sharing Michael

love your poem 'eternal bird' it has a very poetic flow and i can imagine your home as i read keep on writting send me a message when you have written a new poem