Eternal Comments

I appreciate the generous flow of the poem.Wonderfully depicted and delineated poem for the very purpose to be eternal..

Such a wonderful truth of life is visible here. Why no one has touched it yet? I am very fortunate to read and comment this as a first person here. Deeply philosohical and heart touching poem. I give 10+ for this great work

‘A puzzle of confusion/Life of delusion/A wrong conclusion/New birth, new illusion ‘~ These four bottom lines indeed ‘Bottom Line’ of poetry …very deep poem needs contemplation by several reads Wow I find resemblance with Indian Vedic thought great… thanks sharing Hon’ble Poet Louis Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10