Etched In Time Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Etched In Time

Rating: 5.0


Etched in glass, a reflection of meaning from
the past. Chiseled in stone, words we should have
shown. Carved in time, the love we leave behind.
Painted by hand, a piece of heart stands. Words
written in pen, do they cut or do they mend.Spoke
out loud, are they humble or are they proud. Do
they comfort or do they cloud. Are they kind.. the
words we leave behind. Would we find, it would be
okay to hit replay. Because what we say, might echo
again someday. What impression have we made. Is it
joy or is it sorrow, for the days of tomorrow. Can
little ones follow? Whats left...
Etched in glass,
chiseled in stone,
Carved in time,
Painted by hand,
Written in pen,
And spoke out loud.

Etched In Time
Wednesday, November 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Painted by Helen Cagnoni
Placed here in Loving Memory!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christopher Tye 30 November 2016

Really good poem, the world could be a far better place if we took time to think what we did for the world in our life and what legacy we leave for the next generation.

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Rebecca Navarre 30 November 2016

Thank You! Christopher, For Such A Wonderfully Kind Response! I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Wonderful Poetry! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

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Susan Williams 29 November 2016

We never know what life we saved by an encouraging word, we never know whose heart we crushed by a thoughtless word. Words spoken to children are often engraved deep into their souls for good or ill. The Bible talks about the need to put a bit in our mouths and rein ourselves in. To my recollection, the Bible doesn't say anything bad about being a silent person. Well done write on a very important topic. 10+++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 30 November 2016

Thank You! So Very Much Susan, For Such A Lovely And Deep Response! Your Writings Are So Beautiful And Creatively Written! ! ! I Always Love To Look Forward To Reading More! ! !

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Jeri Martindale 23 November 2016

It seems we ponder the same things about life! Love the poem

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Rebecca Navarre 23 November 2016

Thank You! Jeri, For Your Very Kind Response! I Look Forward To Reading Your Poetry! ! ! Thank You Again! Many Blessings! ! !

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