Friday, July 28, 2006

Etched In Stone (Sensitive Material) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once upon a time I was Daddy's little girl
He put me on a pedestal and gave me the world

He filled my life with sunshine and never any rain
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Debra Henry
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Joe Breunig 20 September 2012

An emotive and heart-wrenching piece; hopefully one day, sexual crimes will be permanently deterred. -Joe Breunig Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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David Darbyshire 28 July 2006

Cool poem Deb, I agree with tara, and welcome, bummer deb. hope it was jst a poem? , have nice day dave xxx

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PS - I see it is your first post here. Welcome.. and the first of many more to come I hope. t x

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This is deeply well-written and utterly heartbreaking. You sound almost detached from yourself, a tone and flow very appropriate to the message you etch so finely. t x

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