Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Saturday, April 23, 2016

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'Do you want to hear my latest poem? '
I asked Fabio Escobar the other day.

'Where is it? ' he asked.
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Bri Edwards 03 September 2016

Pode ficar tranquilo. Deixe tudo com a gente. .........i don't 'see' a rhyme here, or in the translation, but...............? nice having a helpful friend. bri ;)

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Kim Barney 03 September 2016

There was a perfect rhyme. His last word, GENTE, rhymed with both of my end words, DOENTE and QUENTE.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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