Thursday, October 11, 2012

Essentially Yours! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wake up, kids, we are traveling back,
Please, don't remove the blankets,
Lie down comfortably and open the window,
Golden rays may try to peep and shade your lens,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Dave Walker 12 October 2012

An amazing twist on travel. A great poem.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 October 2012

That connects the old world with the new, a fine line the poem is dramatic!

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