Pranab k c
12/08/2011
Doors closed
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Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation nicely crafted with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Pranab.
A great poem dear poet! I feel the power of silence that is ventilated through this wonderful poem! The ending is just beautiful........................10
door closed but opens an opening wide with no-door ever been builT anywhere where you me they're playing altogether naked with no-flesh, illuminating strictly the light-particles beyond the hazards of birth rebirth and death...TOTAL REALITY O WHAT A POET UR A BEAUTY.
thank you The Poet Poet. The quoted sound hears uniqueness. Inspiring interaction. Thank you very much.
do read more of mine and comment like tthis sometimes flow of appreciation also inspire the new to ignite fighting spirit. PH could accept that challenge also..... to hold, to increase their self-assurance.
In silence we all finally end. A fine thought out offering that makes us work. Well done dear poet.++10 Robert
When doors close we find silence. These lines are so immersing in solitude, really liked the words.
Well written. Silence is a good thing when you need to be alone and nobody hampers you in your endeveours. Keep writting. My pleasure and a Happy New Year!
Nice one. Everywhere is silence. I was busy at that time in reading That Long Silence novel by Shashi Deshpande
Very thought provoking and philosophical. But, as per the observations made by senior poets like Valsa George and Kelly Kurt, I also feel that the expression should be easy to understand. Thanks. lamentable constipation of those sensuous past-moments no the grave with dirty rust of dust and condemnable clarity but a passion simply old with punctuating accentuation
Wonderful poem, silence can be a pleasure but so isolating.
My pleasure to have read our passionate verse this early morning! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing 7: 15 AM EST
your thought process, your language and the use of the language in a masterful way is astonishing. no footsteps, no movement of rattling wind even no probability of assuming the ecstatic appearance embodiment of any longing or embarrassing embrace of lamentable constipation of those sensuous past-moments i like these verses in your poem thank you Pranabji
Your vocabulary is impressive. Your grasp of my native tongue is inspiring. Your thought process is intriguing. Thanks for sharing all of this
So intriguing and paradoxical, your poems float above me and I find it difficult to make a comment, but know it is real weighty stuff! Thanks for your appreciative comment!
Doors closed windows pane stiff with silence sound of near past in the whole background roaring the wilds they became two the different genders intriguing opening lines full of pathos intensity a strong introduction leading into the themes of 'of love, more than love or no-love paradox' truly a poem leaving avid readers begging for more
Indeed a syzygy of words of dealings as we travel thru life, best read twice and the wisdom unfolds...regards++++10
Silence is the most vociferous preacher. Wonderful expression of the longing and angst.. liked the poem. May I invite you to read my poem "And Silence Is What I Choose "