Wednesday, January 3, 2007

º)))) .·´¯`·.Essence Of Life¸.·´¯`·.¸((((º Comments

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In the essence
of our life
we come to feel, to see
the vulnerability of our souls
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Coletha Albert 03 September 2012

Love and Life conquers all.

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George P. Stasiuk 03 January 2007

Started thinking Dr. Strangelove after the first two lines. Got gratitude with the rest, than some Strangelove in the end again. POWERFUL THIS! However the reader perceives the message, your aim is unerring and true. Perfect by me. George

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Patricia Gale 03 January 2007

Outstanding work Kristin, Power packed with emotions.... The fish are adorable... you are so creative!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 03 January 2007

'COLD DEATH...BALSAM OF CARE...Powerful language to a fervid slice of emotioal lit.You deliver this style everso well, my dear....I AGREE W/MY FRIEND CHUCK....THE FISH STAY! tHEY ARE (I THINK) , A BIBLICAL SIGN OF LIFE, pEACE & TRANQUILITY, IF I HAVE NOT FORCOTTEN SISTER MARY CATHERINES CATACHISM CLASS FROM 1965....GREAT WORK, KRIS FRANKSTER

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Chuck Audette 03 January 2007

The poem was good, and I liked what you did with the title - cute fish! -chuck

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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