In the essence
of our life
we come to feel, to see
the vulnerability of our souls
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Started thinking Dr. Strangelove after the first two lines. Got gratitude with the rest, than some Strangelove in the end again. POWERFUL THIS! However the reader perceives the message, your aim is unerring and true. Perfect by me. George
Outstanding work Kristin, Power packed with emotions.... The fish are adorable... you are so creative!
'COLD DEATH...BALSAM OF CARE...Powerful language to a fervid slice of emotioal lit.You deliver this style everso well, my dear....I AGREE W/MY FRIEND CHUCK....THE FISH STAY! tHEY ARE (I THINK) , A BIBLICAL SIGN OF LIFE, pEACE & TRANQUILITY, IF I HAVE NOT FORCOTTEN SISTER MARY CATHERINES CATACHISM CLASS FROM 1965....GREAT WORK, KRIS FRANKSTER
The poem was good, and I liked what you did with the title - cute fish! -chuck
Love and Life conquers all.