Friday, August 21, 2009

Essence Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

With heads down life exile
vehement mind carry the pain!
earned pride burnt into ashes
truth in vain life vacuum
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lily peace lago every by to ph
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Noel Horlanda 20 September 2009

Essence is the core of life without it there's no life, no you or me, no past, no present and no future. Very well penned, deep thoughts and good imagery.

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Marieta Maglas 30 August 2009

wonderful last stanza: ''The will to live is the thread of life Loveliest Angel Living In The Heart Alive and the patience of love always win and the thread of life is the fragrance of life and the will to live is the Essence of Life'' wonderful poem, lovely to read.......................10+++

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Ejaz Khan 22 August 2009

Piognant poetry here, very deep and brilliant thoughts!

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Rakesh Bedi 22 August 2009

Deep thoughts; penned beautifully, lago lago!

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deep beautiful penned thoughts...loved it pain in heart crumbling us down nerves of steel melting in distress standing alive nakedly down the first ray of sun bring in an ambition to live! !

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lily peace lago every by to ph

lily peace lago every by to ph

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