Monday, May 9, 2016

Esprit Comments

Rating: 3.9

What is this word, esprit?
Your smile reflected in a pool
As minnows dart like small electric lights,
Your voice soft and subtle
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Tom Billsborough
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Edward Kofi Louis 31 October 2016

Mystery! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Billsborough 31 October 2016

Sometimes is mystery is the true attractive force. Thanks, Edward.

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Unwritten Soul 10 May 2016

Oh i noted about the poet's notes here.... To me i still can get this poem in my own interpretation..it was beautiful :) These lines really get me: As it enters like a butterfly each membrane of my soul. .. Spirit, in a sense, But closer to infinity, A bird of paradise In all its preening mystery It just wonderful..and you know, this craft is just beautiful and soulful really good :)

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Tom Billsborough 31 October 2016

Words can imply true magic when they suggest many meanings. It is good that we have the choice to apply our own interpretations, as you say, my Unwritten Soul.

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