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this is nice: ] reminds me how i feel about my special someone: ]
i give it that becuz u got to have passion and something is missin like you was the i dream of to nite or something like tht
this is a great poem. poetry comes in all forms, but you seem to just be writting a book...not a poem..im not being negative, but you should allow yourself to speak in different tones. you shouldnt make everything a story that is set in stone. it should speak to others hearts when they read it. not just your own. speak with multiple meanings.
this is more of a compliment to ones own life....and when you love your life to this extent you definitely make something out of it..
a good poem, full of love, written by an angel.