Saturday, October 16, 2010

Esoterica Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time,
Like a rhyme
May be found pleasing,
But, the wonder of what comes next,
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Smoky Hoss
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Kevin Patrick 11 May 2012

A charming piece, your opening reminds me of what Samuel Clemens said about time, the forever will exsist without us I guess that is the tease

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Matt Mooney 01 August 2011

A facinating subject and thoughts well expressed.Life is for living.10.

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Patti Masterman 19 February 2011

I really like this, it's succinct and has a pleasing little rhythm within.

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Jenny Gordon 14 January 2011

Fascinating. I like it. It's alluding to forever, isn't it? Which is and almost isn't an unknown, defined it seems and yet absolutely unknown as yet.

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