Friday, November 11, 2005

Eskimos Comments

Rating: 4.8

that is how we kiss
rubbing noses
lip locked
wrapped
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Adryan Barnathan
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David Darbyshire 24 November 2005

What about the Canadian Hugs? Cuddels? nice poem dave xxxxx

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Ulrike Gerbig 12 November 2005

you writing gets better and better every day now! my thoughts are with you! u.xxx

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Gershon Hepner 11 November 2005

Lovely the way this one flows. I think breathes should be breaths, Gershon

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

This poem possesses a rare sweetness. I love it!

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Adryan Barnathan 11 November 2005

your critique made me realise...that I did rub noses first! thank you~

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David Darbyshire 11 November 2005

Well I am a canuk and was wondering were is the 'rubbing noses'? ? very nice dave xxx

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Herbert Nehrlich1 11 November 2005

I like this. Very nice, very different and icy-hot in its own little way. Best H

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