Friday, June 24, 2016

Eschew The Person Comments

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eschew the person
who disdains children

pull away from those
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Barry Middleton
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Spock The Vegan 24 June 2016

I enjoyed your poem. Too many people prattle in their poetry, but some women and children do it also. That's their nature.

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Barry Middleton 24 June 2016

Save us all from prattlers. LLAP!

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Hans Vr 24 June 2016

I enjoyed the first stanza so much. I think love of children is an essential component of life. As the poem progresses, I felt a bit uneasy. If we 'd avoid all these groups of people, we may have to lead a very lonely life. All of us have our own life views and perceptions. Let us mix with all and lead 'rich' and interesting life. Thought provoking poem

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Barry Middleton 24 June 2016

Sorry you felt uneasy but I can assure you this is a lonely world.

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