Escapism Comments
Dive in my head and you will see,
The fairness of my fantasy,
My reason to reside in my dream;
Leave the world of chaos and pain.
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Nice work Juneil. I liked the first line as it really gets the reader in. Your imagery is wonderful and your philosophy commended. Karin Anderson
a simile write..with good invitation to examine fully concept of mind into peace..10
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7/22/2025 1:49:47 PM # 1.0.0
I dived into your head and i dived into your poem.........your poem reminded me of my poem unbelievable dream............Good Write......10+++.....