Saturday, April 8, 2017

Escaping The Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Burnt and charred
Inside, his brain scarred
Smoldering fire
Almost his funeral pyre
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Billy Loving
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2017

Finding safety from burning out is wise really. Flames illuminate the night. Very thoughtful poem is shared that provokes thought too.10

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Make Shift 08 April 2017

Awesome poem you've captured that sense of panic and then relief :)

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