Tuesday, August 14, 2007

Escaping Reality Comments

Rating: 4.8

To lie naked on the fiery hot beach
Waves crashing and cooling thy soul
Washing away pain and misery
A blinding sun warming every inch of body and soul
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Jennifer Unknown
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Theresa Moore 05 October 2007

A wonderful way to create your own reality. Great awareness...

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x... x... 22 August 2007

Sounds like the best possible escape to me, if one must, and we all do at times. good poem here...~~~marci. :) ~~~~

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Chad Fisher 19 August 2007

Very beautiful. I love it.

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 14 August 2007

this is an awsome poem. I myself wouldl like sometimes to get away from the world for a little while, to not think for a little while. favorite line: 'Crawling into your soul, your heart' beautiful imagery. :)

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